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Super Similes

Year 4 are really proud of the similes they created which were inspired by the weather. We’re looking forward to more amazing examples in their writing when they create ‘tales of fear’!


Clouds swam across the sky like swans. - Hana

The moon shimmered in the sky like a star. - Lillie

The stars sprang from side to side like a leaping frog. - Ryan

The wind flew like a bird. - Emily

The lightning scared like a scarecrow. - Lucas

Lightning struck like people screaming. - Maya

The stars shone like the sun. - Hugo

The stars sparkled like a glittering diamond. -Isabella

The rain splashed like moondrops. - Molly

The moon glittered like a rainbow. - Caleb

The wind blew like a turbine - Joseph

Lightning shot like a jet. - Elliott

The wind roared like a lion. - Sara

The stars shimmered like a lake at night. - Sasha

The rain was banging like thunder and lightning. - Isabelle

Clouds swam across the sky like diamonds. - Tutu

The stars shimmered like diamonds sparkling in the sky. - Ava

The rain scattered like a sprinkler. - Cillian

The moon sparkled like the shimmering stars. - Belle

The wind soared like a plane. - Elias

The wind smashed into the trees like a car. - Layton

Lightning whizzed like a wand. - Sienna

The stars exploded like dynamite. - Max

The stars glowed like the sun. - Saanvi

The rain poured so much the city was like a giant pool. - Blake

The moon gleamed like a spear of light. - Evie

The rain sounded like thunder. - Edie

The moon was like a flashlight. - Fletcher

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